andross wrote:One critic though: you play too fast,i think it would sound better if you play it slowly,like it was attended.
I don,t know what to tell... Hmm, in my opinion the most important voice here, is the higher one, the second voice it is only for reaching the sound, of course it is beautifull too, but if you play it slowly you risk to mix this 2 separate voice and does not suppose to sound like an arpeggio

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I think as I have two different instruments hwo must be very clearly different.
But is just my opinion.
The piece was mesterized a little. I tried to remove the noise and a little Church effect

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I also agre, on the score is writen LENTO
