Thanks for your comments.
I'll damp measure 12 as you suggested.Will try to improve tempo.I already recorded my exam piece.Will re-record considering your comments.
Mr.Delcamp advice for this assignment is
Definition:In music performance and notation, legato [leˈɡaːto] (Italian for "tied together"; French lié; German gebunden) indicates that musical notes are played or sung smoothly and connected. That is, the player makes a transition from note to note with no intervening silence."wiki
I'll do my best to do legato function for this assignment.