Thanks. I believe I had my usual complement of hesitations and fumble-fingeredness, but overall not quite cringe-inducing, which was the bar I set for this particular piece.
I have incorporated your suggestions for Mi Favorita and hopefully will have an improved version for the final. It flows a bit better in places like the transition from measure 8 to 9, 12 to 13, and so on. I think the other thing you pointed out was my speed in measure 23, and I may have improved that too, but only a little. Also, my RH nails are a little grown out - even though I prefer to play without nails most of the time, I felt this piece really benefited from nails, more than most (or should I say, the lack of nails really detracted from it, more than most).