I like this very much!
I feel that a piece of music, like a novel, should start with a good sentence. One that grabs you. Your's starts out really nicely!
It's easy to play and quite pretty. That's the next
thing we always look for.
It's also nice when voices descend (or ascend) one after another. I love that!
The only suggestion I might have, is that it could get a bit monotonous. It might work better in 3/4 time, so there are less triplet patterns? I'll try it that way later...
Good work so far,