Thanks Etude, and I agree with your comments. This has become a bit of a warm-up piece for me, so I should re-record it. I can play it a bit better now. One thing my teacher pointed out to me is that I should let the preceding measures treble note(s) ring as I play the next measures bass note. I was chopping it off.
Funny how slow my ear is developing. He told me to play it, then he played it and he said "hear the difference"? Dumb look from Steve. Then he played it like I do, then played it correctly. "Hear/see the difference?". More dumb looks. I've slowly gotten to it at last, and now I'm really trying to concentrate on "connectedness".
I play the trebles amimi.