Well played there Cam.
Sounds in control. Firm right hand, i like that.
One could say this sounds a hair on the naily/bright side,
but that is more a preference issue.
It certainly is played well, with a good degree of control.
Your punch in at around 34 seconds could have been cleaner,
but ive heard worse on major releases, so....
Next, i would say, work on dynamics and tonal variations.
The key, as im sure you know, is go slow, and dont sacrifice clarity
and cleanliness by getting too cute with the right hand.
Nice job Cam! Keep it goin man...