Thanks for listening Brian, Cary and Aitua. Much appreciated.
Brian99 wrote: Its hard to find any fault so if I was to comment at all, I would say that the first 20 seconds or so lose a bit of the flow and could be improved.. its not a tempo thing, but more like loss of breath - like a singer forced to take air. You fix this as the piece progresses.
Cary W wrote: The opening measures seemed hesitant...intentional perhaps?
Not really intentional, I think, but more because I was being looked at by that ugly monster called a video camera!
I'll try and start with more confidence next time.........
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