Loo. Sorry no one has commented yet. It will be much better when you take the lessons together with the rest of the students. Points to be aware of: Follow the damping indications in the score. Chose a tempo appropriate for the most difficult part(s) of the piece. Also take care to tune your guitar before recording.
David. Very controlled. Good rest strokes and nice sound. If you want to improve even further one thing to improve is to play even more legato (no stop in the sound between notes)
PS I only checked Lo, nous marchons sur un étroit chemin and Leccion 5a