That's awesome! All notes are clear, difficult passages sound good.
I did not notice any dramatic posture change, but the right hand seems to be in a more advantageous position now
A couple observations:
- measure 39: played 2 times faster. Other measures did not have that change speed (like in the orig. video from Delcamp), only this one stands out
- most challenging damps are missing
- musicality: part 1 sounds a bit somber. I'd recommend to follow prof. Delcamp's recommendation: " To give the ends of the phrases more character, I speed up the tempo a little and avoid letting the arpeggios ring on in bars 7, 15, 23, 31 and 47."