Hello firedoom... this is quite well done
I actually agree with fEZ... you sound a little bored with the piece, and yet at the same time you don't sound very confident.
Perhaps it is time to 'step up' as fEZ says... and then come back to it.
It is not an easy piece to play cleanly so perhaps a little more work on the shifts.
However I enjoyed listening to you... technically you appear to have it down
I would like to hear an update from you in a month or so
for playing for us and keep up the good work.
Joy in the music
Never, ever give up!... I leave my songprint on your heart.